Question by Emma: Is this story good? Please give me constructive cristiscm! Also, help for a title!?
Please read this and give me constructive criticism! Also, can you please give me ideas for titles. Also, I need help for names. Read it and then continue reading. I know that it has poncutation and grammar errors!
Sunday September 23rd 1890
Addie-Rose was sitting on her chair beside the window. She watched the waves hit the shore and the sun slowly going down. Her window let in a fresh breeze of air and it passed through her blonde, curled hair. It was Sunday, and Addie-Rose had gone to church with her family. She wore a long blue dress with a brown hat. She stood up and walked out her bedroom door, to the family room. As she walked down the stairs, the back of her dress followed her. Suddenly, she tripped and fell down the remaining stairs.
“Oh Lord! Addie-Rose Spencer! Why are you on the ground, all relaxed? Andrew Ruston is here; don’t you think he should see you as a good-mannered young lady? Now stand up and hurry to go put another dress!!” Addie’s mom ordered.
Addie-Rose sighed and climbed up the stairs. Her mom already had plans of wedding for her…but lord! She was only 16! About half an hour later, she went down the stairs again…this time with long green dress and a matching green hat. She slowly went down the stairs, graciously, Andrew following every step. When arrived at the bottom of the stairs, she bowed to Andrew. He took her hand and gave it a delicate kiss. Everyone walked to the dining room and sat down on a chair. The delicious smell of chicken filled the air.
Now for the names.
I need ideas for Addie-Rose’s mom name, for her dad, her best friend and her maid.
Thanks ALOT for your help and if I get published, ever, I will send you a copy if you want to!!
Best answer:
Answer by Lizzy
well I always love exotic names
Nevaeh
Jaylin
Fiona
Kaylyn
Ariana
Anathose
thiose kinds of names. I can never decide on boy names but I like
Jayden
Liam
Christopher
Kevin
more normal names for guys
I liked the story. I would read more of it
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